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What industry legends, marketing's leaders and internet millionaires are saying ... |
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Gary Bencivenga
"LOVES"
Peter Stone's copy |
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Gary Halbert called Peter
Stone's copy
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John Carlton says Peter
Stone is "TRUSTED
BY SOME OF THE BEST MARKETERS IN THE BIZ" |
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Clayton Makepeace claims Peter Stone has "MASTERED ... PERSUASION IN PRINT" |
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Because of this knack of mine for writing money-making copy, I've been flooded with testimonials from celebrity copywriters and beginners alike -- So many I've coined the title: "THE COPYWRITER'S COPYWRITER"
"Increase Your Conversion Rate By Up To 700% Starting Today..."
Dear Internet
Friend,
You know you could be—should be—making a lot, or a lot more money online right now.
Once You Know How It's Not That Hard To Do
After all, there's more than a little opportunity waiting for you.
Direct Marketing is a two-trillion dollar
industry.
That's one-thousand billion dollars ... times two! Or a stack of $1,000 bills, 134 miles high.
This is the kind of opportunity marketers would normally have to wait a lifetime to experience. That's right, an astonishing—almost incomprehensible opportunity to make money. Better yet, it's open to all comers.
During
The 80's A New Dimension In Marketing Opened Up
And With It – Windfall Profit Opportunities
For The Average Guy And Gal
At first, the web looked like a natural winner to me...
- Fast, affordable access to an unlimited number of markets.
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Each market teeming with buyers.
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The equivalent of inheriting a letter shop—complete with free paper, ink and postage thrown in ... the perfect delivery mechanism for a sales message.
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A marketer's dream come true.
Now ... with all of the do-it-yourself, point-'n-click marketing software available, and with all of the step-by-step assistance you'll find on professional and friendly marketing forums, starting a business online has never been faster, easier, or more realistically affordable ...
How Can Plunking A Salesletter On A Website Produce A Big Winner
Most online marketing is pretty mechanical. You can use articles, pay-per-click advertising, press releases, forum posts, links, an ezine, traffic from search engines and so on, to drive people, interested in what you sell, to your website. The more the merrier. After your traffic flow is established, the only variable—the only vulnerable link in the chain of events that determine the degree of your success—is your sales letter. What Are Your Odds For Making Serious Money? If you present your product or service to a market, hungry for your offering, and your competition is mild to moderate, then the right sales letter will give you enormous competitive advantage over all others in your marketplace. Since this is one of my favorite topics, let me expand this discussion. Light A Fire Think of desire as combustibles piled on top of an ant hill. Inside is where your market lives. Once your sales letter ignites a state of arousal, kindles to passion, then intensifies your market's desire—to a white-hot flash point—your frenzied nest, frustrated by unmet desire, will seek relief from the only obvious, desire-quenching option. At this point, there's no stopping them.
If this describes your situation, then, "Heck YES!" I personally believe your success is inevitable, and "you're just one sales letter away from wealth".
Just Attacking An Anemic Sales Letter With A Rewrite Can Make Existing Conversion Rates Jump Up 100% ... And Up ... 700% Or More Sadly ... the thought of making a fortune online may be an idea beyond the barren imaginations of some—the nay-sayers—those without an energized vision for their future. But then there are the open-minded others.
Their ample successes are verified and perhaps more important, repeatable. They've proven it's possible for nearly anyone to follow this sure-fire formula for acquiring wealth online.Why Gamble With Success I'm a
grounded thinker ... opposed to 'get-rich-quick' schemes ... at odds with arbitrary success. And so it only follows,
in order to
gain as much certainty as possible over the entire process that makes
this electronic sales arena, and online marketing
profitable, I became a computer Systems Engineer.
Apparently
... I Don't Suck ...
Several
public events boosted me into the limelight to rave
reviews ...
- Public Event
#1. I demonstrated
my techniques for increasing conversion rates, in
public.
The conversion rate of my subject site (www.SonicMemo.com)
shot up from 1.8% to 3.9%, almost overnight.
The event created a buzz.
- Public Event
#2. Again,
in front of an audience, I demonstrated how to create wealth.
This time, I wasn't the only guest.
Yanik Silver, Michel Fortin, Carl Galetti and others
were part of the package.
My subject site shattered all previous sales records.
- Public Event
#3. You probably
heard about my recent teleseminars with copywriting
and marketing legends; Gary Halbert and John Carlton.
Michel Fortin hosted them for me.
These events rocked the online copywriting and marketing
world - by design.
Instead of selling access to the interviews, I decided
to give them away free - by design.
People went nuts.
In less than 2 weeks, that one strategic decision
generated a huge, highly responsive, tightly focused
list for Gary, John, Michel and me to sell to.
- PLUS:
My copy
instantly made one client's pet training videos
the dominant product in this lucrative market.
Until now, only a few people in the business know
about this site:(www.birdtricks.com).
My early 20's client made so much money, he retired
his job just weeks after posting my copy on his
website.
- PLUS:
A
copy consultation netted an ebook author a 700%
increase in his conversion rate.
... An avalanche of orders ... in a market where
"ebooks are dead".
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DOUBLE PLUS:
I Consulted, critiqued, rewrote, wrote the copy
for, or was involved in many winning promotions
during 2004 and 2005. Sometimes my role was minor
and sometimes I handled the entire project.
But what's important for you to know, is that
I have first-hand knowledge of what made every
one I was involved in work.
A Common-Man
Opportunity
The web doesn't
care who you are. It harbors no opinion on which side of town you're from, or if you hold
a degree, a diploma, or a glacier-cold can of Bud. You don't have to be unusual—connected, gifted, or rich—to
use a few simple tools and techniques that boost profits.
For the average guy or gal building wealth, the web is a great equalizer. Once you use proven methods, explosive conversion rates are almost
always attainable. It's what I do.
Field-Tested And Refined Money-Multiplying Copy
Provides Me With A Rapturous Skyline View Of Minneapolis
Overlooking My Favorite Little Fishing Lake
During 2007, General Electric was my largest client. Big jobs, sometimes. Big clients, occasionally, but I'm not stuffy. Mostly I write websites and paper-&-ink sales letters for entrepreneurs, hungry for, intensely focused on, fully committed to and aggressively engaged in the process of making serious money.
I'm Fortunate To Enjoy A Shower Of Praise From
The World's “Most Wanted” Copywriters That Have Already Made Their Clients BILLIONS |
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Gary
Bencivenga: I
love Peter Stone's copywriting.
He uses the same techniques I have found
to maximize response — deep, patient
research into the product before he begins,
powerful benefit-driven headlines, and,
most important, lots of compelling proof
elements that make prospects believe and
buy with pleasure and abandon.
That's what star salespeople do and it's
what Peter does in print and online.
Very few copywriters know how to bring this
off.
Peter is one of the few.
Gary
Bencivenga
www.BencivengaBullets.com |
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Gary Halbert: The
copy is amazingly good ... among the best
I've ever seen. My hat goes off to you,
Peter. 
Gary
C. Halbert
www.TheGaryHalbertLetter.com |
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John
Carlton: Peter
has honed his chops... and he's a writer
trusted by some of the best marketers in
the biz. The guy has his game down solid.
John
Carlton
www.MarketingRebel.com |
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Michel
Fortin: Peter Stone is the only one I trust with important projects that DEMAND results ... He delivers hardcore, bottom-line sales and profits ... Peter Stone is my co-writer, my associate and often my 'fresh pair of eyes'. He is definitely the person you need to call on now. 
Michel
Fortin
www.SuccessDoctor.com |
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Brian Keith Voiles: You are truly a seasoned pro whom I have much to learn from. You're awesome Peter. I deeply admire you and your work. Your results amaze me!
Brian Keith Voiles
www.BrianKeithKillerCopyClinic.com |
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Clayton Makepeace: Peter Stone is one of only a half-dozen or so writers I know who has mastered the art and science of persuasion in print. The depth of Peter's grasp of his product and prospect is awe-inspiring ... his sales arguments, iron-clad ... his offers, impossible to refuse. Any marketer lucky enough (or smart enough) to get a spot on Peter's dance card should fall to his knees and thank his lucky stars. And any copywriter or web marketer fortunate enough to benefit from his wisdom should cherish it as he would a D-flawless diamond.
Clayton Makepeace
www.MakepeaceTotalPackage.com |
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Maybe it's finally your turn to join the legends and luminaries of our industry—the super-successful. After all ... There's Enough Virtual Real
Estate So Anyone Can Own A Private Forest Of 'Money-Tree'
Websites To Shake
Whenever—And However Often—They Like
- MSN
logs over 350 Billion visitors every month.
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Nielsen-NetRatings
reports, the number of Internet users with annual
household incomes of $150,000 and more, grew nearly
20% from 8.6 million in 2004, to 10.3 million
in 2005. This group spends 76 hours a month online
and views 2,126 web pages - more than any other
income group for both metrics.
- Nielsen-NetRatings
measured the current digital media universe as 199,861,345
- people.
These figures only apply to the United States, not
the rest of the world, which is just revving up.
- According to Business Week,
the ad industry as a whole, is growing at a healthy
7.7% per year. Online ads blow that figure away
at a whopping growth rate of 28.8%.
- The
CIA World Factbook states that during 2005, 136
million people joined the Internet — more
than 15,000 per hour, more than 372,000 per day.
The Internet
Is Here To Stay And Growing Daily ...
As you can see, the global reach of the Internet
represents a rich, very real, exceptionally rare
and equal opportunity to make an indecent amount
of cash from home, starting from scratch.
Compared To Any
Other Medium Online Marketing Is Dirt Cheap
A full-page ad in a metro
newspaper could easily run you $10,000.00 to appear—once.
That's just for the space.
A tiny classified ad buried in the back of USA Today
will run you about $5,000.00—per month.
Direct mail runs about $55,000.00 per hundred thousand
mailed.
Today ... right now ... anyone with opposable thumbs
can buy and use a site builder—secure hosting for
their site ... an autoresponder ... an ezine builder –
everything you need to stick your sales message in
front of millions – every day for a year –
for under $300.00.
But there's a rub.
The Market
Is Rife With Ads Making Outrageous Promises
And Unsupported Claims Leaving Us With Prospects
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Way
Back When...
- Entire markets
stood untouched.
- Getting a reader's
attention was easy. Any sales pitch
was a new and exciting curiosity.
Our messages were
getting through, being read and people
were buying.
What
The Hype-Artists
And Marketing Gurus
Aren't About To Admit To You
I'm sure you've
heard the fast and far-traveling news
about free-flowing, easy money and the
'Internet lifestyle'.
Everyone wants in on the action. Who can
blame them?
However, selling on the Internet has changed
since those stories about easy money began.
Many of the unsuspecting, are still being
sold the idea that it's easy.
"To get rich using my system ...
all you need to do is throw an idea at
the Internet and see what sticks...then
go play golf ...".
Not
Anymore Skooter
As consumers, we're
hit by hundreds of advertising messages
from every angle, every day.
A quick trip to get gas might net you
25 ad impressions — a couple on
the radio, a billboard or two. And when
you arrive...
Signs selling soda-pop litter the parking
lot.
Grab for the pump handle and you'll see
a TV-like screen on the pump hawking a
'2-fer-1' offer for chips or cookies and
another ad on top of the pump.
Need another ad?
Check out the screen on the cash machine
inside the store. Or the coupon dispensers
that stick out from the shelves in every
isle.
No. The competition for your prospect's
attention is ferocious.
Backlash!
Of
those hot-to-trot buyers, many will shop
around.
Unless they buy on the spot, the net effect
is that your copy is pre-selling your
competitor's product.
For
Systematic Blockbuster Success
You've Got To Market
Like You Mean It
Staying On Purpose
Using Tightly Focused Messages That Close
The Sale On The Spot
Resist
thinking about marketing on the Internet
as a 'get-rich-quick' scheme.
No. I wouldn't walk away from an opportunity
to make a quick (legal) million dollars.
But instead of gambling on a 'get-rich-quick'
idea—I prefer a dependable business
model, based on a simple, sure plan that
delivers results.
What
Are Your Odds?
Some
experts say—on average—only
one out of seven, or eight new websites
are winners.
So normally, the odds of success are overwhelmingly
against you.
But if you beat those odds, you can collect
the marketing equivalent of hitting a
casino jackpot.
And the only way I know how to beat those
odds, is to find and use an edge.
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A
Standing Ovation For Peter Stone
"Peter
Stone is the only one I trust..."
"Peter
Stone is my co-writer, my associate and
often my 'fresh pair of eyes'.
He
is definitely the person you need to call
on... Now".
Michel
Fortin

"...
My secret weapon is often a final critique
by Peter Stone."
"No
matter how good my copy is, Peter has
the very impressive gift of finding, then
squeezing out every last bit of potential."
Timothy
Warnock

"Peter
Stone knows his stuff"
"Sales
copy isn't easy to write, but Peter Stone
knows his stuff."
Chris
Pirillo

"I'm
sorry ..."
"...
but when I saw that headline you wrote,
I had to steal it. I swiped it without
your permission."
Famous
copywriter (name withheld)

"He
gets into the mind of your prospect...
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"...
and instantly
knowing their fears, wants and desires
... makes them buy!"
Jesse
Forrest

"Peter
Stone did the actual blood-letting."
"
I implemented (...) his suggestions and
went from a 1.8% conversion rate, to a
3.9% conversion rate!"
(More than doubled)
Jay Jennings

"Who
do they call?"
"...
He's the guy that big-time Web businesses
and well-known entrepreneurs sneak in
the back door whenever they need to skyrocket
their results!"
(From an ad for a webinar)
Jason
Potash
"Hey
Peter!"
"Talking
with you was great! I probably learned
more from you in that conversation of
ours than from a lot of articles and books
I've read."
Casey
Grayson
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Numbers Don't
Lie ... Gigantic Paydays Are Possible ...
Here's How To Make Darn Sure YOU Get YOURS
One, $100.00
sale per day will gross you about $3,000 per month, or $36,500.00
per year. That's not exciting money, but think of
it in terms of a house payment—paid automatically—by
your very own rich uncle.
Now, let's add a few sales per day and a few websites
and watch your income jump.
Three websites making four, $100.00 sales per day
will gross you $36,000.00 per month.
The chart below, spells out how this is true.
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You
might make more or you might make less - that depends
on many factors including your goals and effort.
How
Losing One $100.00 Sale
Can Wreak Havoc On Your Financial Life
Now take $36,500.00
away from your gross—That's the gross from
one, $100.00 sale per day for a year—lost because of your copy.
If you've never thought about it like that, I know you won't believe this.
Add the revenue you're
leaving on the table from cross-sells, up-sells
and your back-end, to each lost sale. So $100.00
becomes $160.00, or $180.00 ... lost.
$160.00 (lowest total customer value after up-sells and
cross-sells) X 365 (one each day for one year) =
$58,400.00 ... lost.
The gain or loss of a single, $100.00
sale per day may seem insignificant ...
... Until you examine the math and understand how losing
only one sale a day can leave a gash the size of
a canyon on your bottom line.
And if we calculate a
gain of several, $100.00 sales per day, you'll understand
how owning a profitable website or two ... or three can put you in the
luxury car you've had your eye on ...
Warren Buffet Is Known To Have Said: "Price Is What You Pay. Value Is What You Get"
I'm asking you as a practical person ... if your idea is a good one ... isn't it worth teaming up with me—the guy the experts are raving about? Wouldn't that
be a prudent, responsible investment ... necessary leverage to make more money faster ... a significant influence
over your ultimate financial success?
After all, if we either save, or cause one or two additional sales per day — $36,500 to $73,000 per year — you'll begin to realize a substantial return on your investment the moment you hang your new copy.
Please think about this ...
Your Potential
Gain Is Staggering
Your Next Step Is Entirely Up To You
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You could
just ... walk ... away. |
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You could hire a usability
expert, but that's not very practical for a
1, or 2 page sales letter. |
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There are people out
there who'll sell you their opinions, but they
don't actually do anything to improve your bottom
line. |
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You could buy more 'stuff',
but how's that worked out so far? The question
isn't intended to insult or poke fun at anyone
... you need the answer. |
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Seminars can be nothing
short of life changing. But at $2,000 to $3,000
or more per ticket, plus air and hotel to
... network and ... buy more stuff ... |
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The question is, will
a seminar make a breakthrough change in your
bottom line? Nothing philosophical here, let's
get some numbers on the table. What are your
numbers telling you to do? |
Why Not Get
Serious Today?
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Your
sales are waiting for you.
As you already
know ... until you take action, you'll keep moving
along in whatever direction you're already moving.
Maybe that's good.
If you want results, until you give me the go ahead,
I've already done all I can do for you. My hands are
tied ...
"Even God can't drive a parked car".
If you're finally ready to sell and have a little
fun making money, then making the next move is up
to you ..
If Not Now
... When?
Day and night, you're losing every additional penny
of pure profit you could otherwise bank.
If you want to increase your sales, just fill out
the quick-form below and click the red bar at the
bottom to get started right away.
I'll take care of the rest and get back to you as
soon as possible. Please understand that it may take
a couple of days to respond to you.
At this stage, there's no commitment on your part
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You're Paying
For It Anyway
When you think
about your margin of profit bleeding out,
you'll quickly realize that sooner or later, one
way or another, like it or not ... you're paying,
anyway.
SPECIAL NOTE BEFORE
YOU FILL OUT THE SIMPLE FORM BELOW:
Although I own portfolio rights to any and all work
and reserve my right to exercise that ownership
by displaying any and all work, in any medium, at
any time, generally speaking, I regard the work I do for other copywriters,
marketers, and any client, as confidential.
This decision benefits you by protecting you from
scavenging vultures circling the Internet that would swoop in to steal your
ideas, shamelessly knock-off your web site, and swipe copy that
I write and you pay for.
Even though this is a personal decision and does
not represent an obligation, of any sort, to any
individual, group, or business entity, sorry, no
samples beyond the URL's I've provided for you, above.
Do
Something
I don't care
what else you might want to spend the money on.
The only way you won't get fast and fabulous returns,
is if you don't have a market, don't get in front
of that market, or you just don't try.
Here
Are A Few Typical Questions I Hear
Along With My Answers
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"On
the application, below, there's a question about
my budget. Why do you need to know that information up front?" |
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I intend to develop
your project to its maximum potential, within
your stated budget. I'm sure you can understand why I must caution you, here: You aren't going to get a top of the line sales letter for any less than it's worth. Not from anyone. However, if you're on a budget, I suggest we look for a middle ground where your resources and my sales talent can conspire to make you money. Please, accurately state your budget on the form, below. In return, I'll communicate with you simply, honestly and frankly. By the way, if you're feeling uncertain about moving forward with your project, you can always consider booking a consultation. Either way, when you're ready, you can start the process by using the form, below. |
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"What would
you do to increase sales on my website?" |
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The difference between
a website that sells for you and one that is
unproductive, is almost always found in the
sales copy. So, to make your site a 'puller',
I'll rewrite it. |
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If you'd like an extensive
answer, fill out the form below and I'll schedule
you in for a paid consultation. |
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"Do you offer
discounts?" |
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Yes, sometimes I do.
Some clients earn a discount by first paying
for a large volume of work. |
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"Do you accept
joint ventures, instead of cash payment?" |
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It's just not practical
for me, right now. |
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"Do you offer
a money back guarantee, in case I don't like
my copy, or if my product doesn't sell?" |
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None of us win every
time out, however... |
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You're
covered against any possibility of receiving
faulty copy. |
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If you notify
me within 3 days that you want a revision, I'll
revise your copy. |
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If you notify me within
30 days, from the date of delivery, that you're
unhappy with results from your copy, I'll rewrite
the same project a second time at no additional
charge. |
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So if there's any fault
to be found in the copy, you're covered completely. |
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That's a win-win situation. |
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If you're unsure of the
viability of your project, though, perhaps you
should start with an inexpensive phone consultation. |
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You'll find more information
about that option, below. |
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"So, if I hire
you, how long will my ad take?" |
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I'll need to look at your project before I can answer that question accurately. |
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If you're in a highly
competitive, declining market it'll take me
longer to research and write your ad, properly.
Likewise for high-ticket, or for complex sales. |
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If you're in a virgin,
or under-served and hungry market and the value
of your product or service is simple to articulate
... less time. |
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"If I hire
you to write an ad, can I call you and consult
with you on my marketing, too?" |
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Yes, you can pay for
consulting separately. |
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"Sheesh! What
happened to 'over delivering'?" |
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As if a million-dollar
payday isn't enough. (-: |
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Now you can discuss your project for up to 2 consecutive hours with me -- someone the big dogs listen to -- for just $500 ... Most frequently answered questions: QUESTION #1. How can I reduce shopping cart abandonment? QUESTION #2. What 3 elements should I test for most dramatic impact my bottom line? QUESTION #3. Do I need new copy written by a (expensive) pro, or what else can I do that will increase my conversion rate? QUESTION #4. Do I have to use that loud copy to sell professional services? (Discover exactly what kind of copy, certified as legal and compliant, recent tests, conducted by MBA's, was determined to sell high-ticket price points best to an upper-income, well-educated demographic). QUESTION #5. How important is follow up to maximizing customer lifetime value ... how many ... how often?
After an hour-long conversation, Multi-Million-Dollar copywriter Clayton Makepeace said: "Peter Stone busted down the door and slapped my face with a possibility so positively huge, it instantly changed my life's script for years to come." To arrange a consultation (just $500.00) please begin by filling out the form below.
Email Marketing Program -Sell more to your current customers. -Reactivate your past customers. -Generate new customers you might otherwise lose. -Lower your cost per sale. -Introduce new products or services. -Present special offers -Announce sales and conduct special or one-off promotions. -Initiate 2-way communicaton and build trust. -Strengthen your relationship. -Give your customers more attention than your competitor will. My copy and list strategies could increase your gross by $10.00 to $50.00 or more, per month, per list name -- depending on many variables. To discuss this option with me, book an appointment for a consultation (a scant $500) by using the form below .
You May Be One Little 'Tweak' Away From Spectacular
Success And Not Even Know It
Announcing my first ever, 'Keep-It-Simple' Sale (KISS) Or ... How my problem is your opportunity—to own a $3,000 to $5,000 critique for only $1,000 flat—Immediately saving you $2,000 to $4,000 off my normal price (with a few strings attached). My problem ... Up until recently, my process for responding to applicants included a phone chat. (The average lasting two hours). Don't get me wrong, I love meeting new friends, finding out about their hopes and dreams for wealth—money, cars, houses—discussing the beneficial changes increased sales will bring to their lives and contributing what I'm able to any individual's financial freedom. But as Sarah, my assistant pointed out to me, for every 4 applicants, that 2-hours of chatting I enjoy so much equals at least a full day's worth of billable, but uncompensated hours per week. She made another prudent point, too. Let's face it, some applicants aren't considering a purchase so much as they are seeking free information. No big deal. I enjoy their company, too. But taken over a year, according to Sarah's math, those 2-hour chats, at least 4 times per week, equal 52, 8-hour days, 10.4 weeks, or 2.6 months per year, forever lost, uncompensated. Chatting on the phone—An obvious problem. Ok ... Sarah has a valid point, but I put my foot down when she suggested I raise my prices. I think I'm a little more creative than what implementing a knee-jerk solution shows. Especially one that doesn't benefit you. Clearly, these lost billable hours are my (very big, very real and immediate) problem to deal with. But if you'll help me handle this profit destroyer, by allowing us to keep our transaction quick, simple and initially off the phone, in exchange for your understanding, I'll perform the exact same, sales-boosting critique others have paid $3,000 to $5,000 for, except I'll reduce your rate. Of course, I'll need to be a little picky about which sites I work on, so our arrangement makes financial sense to Sarah. But because you're willing to help me recoup 2.6 uncompensated months worth of my time, then I'm willing to drastically reduce your price to just $1,000—flat. I'll critique your headline, lead copy, strategy,
positioning, your close, the offer, guarantee—every
aspect of your sales machine. ...A simple, fun and affordable process for amping up your conversion rate If we can agree, here's how to get started ... Please lock in your special price now by scrolling down this page. You'll see a form. Fill in the form. Fill in every space you can, completely and carefully. Next to where you see, "*Your Budget," there's a box. Click on the downward pointing arrow, causing a selection to drop down. Choose "$1,000 - KISS" (Keep-It-Simple Sale), so I'll know you want to take advantage of this special offer. Next, I'll have a look at your site. If I agree with you that it's possible your sales will improve as the result of a critique, then I'll email you with payment details. (No partial payments offered at this time). Once I receive your payment, I'll prepare a plan by studying your site and plotting out suggested changes. I'll deliver my suggestions to you during a phone call. This low-cost proposition is experimental and may be temporary. We'll see how it goes. Meanwhile, any variation on the above renders this special offer as null and void, so please, follow the instructions carefully. Lock in your special savings by scrolling down this page and filling out the form now.
Total Sales
Letter:
To maximize your odds for success, I'm offering you a few suggestions you may wish to consider before purchasing copy for a sales letter from anyone. You should be
an experienced marketer before making an investment
of this size.
You should have justified your investment in a sales letter by proving to your satisfaction, sufficient
demand for what it is you want to sell.
You should have price tested to find the price that
will produce the most profit for you.
Your offer, guarantee, bonuses and all of your follow-up
and back-end marketing should be vetted out and
ready to go.
Michel Fortin said: "If my life depended on the success of a sales letter and I couldn't write it, I would choose one copywriter above all others without hesitation. That person is Peter Stone." If you're ready to go, please fill out the form now.
You're Just
Minutes Away From Systematic Success
And You're Just One Sales Letter Away From Wealth
Now, as
always, your future is up to you.
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Do It Now ...
Whatever
action you've decided to take ... do it now.
Think of the form below as a pledge to
finally enjoy the lifestyle you know you'd love
to live, but didn't think you could afford. Take
your first step to a new beginning now, by telling me a little about
your business.
THANK YOU.
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Peter
Stone | 330 Oak Grove St. #920 | Minneapolis, MN 55403
No free advice - No soliciting
- No kidding. -->By appointment only<-- (use form above please): (612) 501-4461
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